Playing with words...

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Playing with words...

Postby Itsnotinmyhead » Sat Mar 01, 2014 3:43 pm

The sum total of my creativity for today.
Off to lie down in a darkened room now! :oops:

Fibro v me

None wants to be here,
With Fibromyalgia.
Scenery is bleak where
There's nothing to see.

The first welcome for you,
No matter what you do,
Aching tiredness creeps through,
Like an old dead tree

Then brain fog falls real low,
Hides every word you know.
Chokes your mind, and ego.
Steals who you should be.

Pins, needles, aches and pains,
IBS blocking drains,
Come and go, wax and wane,
For eternity.

My friends, you're not alone,
Scream out loud, have a moan.
Fibromyalgia groan.
You have not got me.

I have you, I can't deny,
Matters not how I try.
But you'll never define
Who I'm meant to be.

Me.
“I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.”
― Maya Angelou
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Re: Playing with words...

Postby denys » Sun Mar 02, 2014 12:33 am

I've moved you into here, very clever writing :-D :-D
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Re: Playing with words...

Postby painprincess1 » Mon Mar 03, 2014 7:33 pm

Well put I loved it xx
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Re: Playing with words...

Postby DavidWilkinson » Mon Jan 08, 2018 10:53 am

It is such a amazing poem, i love the way as you gather all words together,actually it is all about how do speaker play with words, so that they get what they exactly want. Actually i am also a writer, so i know it is quite hard to play with words, so that i really to see your effort.
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