The perscription

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The perscription

Postby tonydin » Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:48 pm

I cant take credit for the origianel story of this as i rememder hearing the basic idea on the radio years ago , but i remember thinking at the time that it should be done in verse , as it did not sound right as it was narrated . and yes i was having anxity problems at the time caused by fm , just did not know it then. once agian its of the top of the head so excuse any spelling errors

The Perscription

The young man stood outside the surgery , his eyes were brimming with tears.
For he must face up to the doctor, expelling his innermost fears .
He said doctor i have this problem , which has been with me now for some while.
For whatever i do ,be it routine or new.
I have never been able to smile.

I could walkdown the street in the morning ,a pretty girl may smile at me.
But i can not smile back ,for its something i lack,
So i need your help badly you see.
The doctor said son i can help you , although theres no medical cure.
I have an idea , that could banish your fear,
and give you a nice smile for sure.

I have two tickets here for the theater , curtisy of a friend on the staff.
and appearing tonight ,is a man of great might.
who always makes people laugh.
His name is Romeo Willeby, and i am truly assured.
If you watch for awile, you can not help but smile,
and thus you would find yourself cured.

The young man said doctor im greatfull, but i cannot accept them you see.
Just why you would know, if you went to the show.
For the one they all laugh at is me.
But doctor i think you have helped me, to you i need never return,
For as long as i make others happy , to smile once more i can learn.

The young man walked out from the doctors , his hands still tight to his head.
But there was a trace of a smile on his face , as he thought what the doctor had said.

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Re: The perscription

Postby tonydin » Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:52 pm

come on iv had a go , some one elses turn now , look forword to seeing it

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Re: The perscription

Postby painprincess1 » Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:41 pm

ive just found this , and how wonderful.
well done i loved it and im going to send it to my freinds to xxxx
smiles and the world smiles with you. cry and you cry alone.
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