How I feel.

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How I feel.

Postby catscout » Thu Mar 27, 2014 12:30 am

Hi guys I hope you are all okay and managing to get through this day as best you can. I don't normally do poetry but as a writer I guess it just wants to come out and if this is how it does it then that's fine with me. This is how I feel I didn't know it until the words came out as it seemed to write itself. I wonder how many of you do this without even realising like me. Enjoy.

After the long day is done

Home is there you have won

Step inside the door is closed

Relax the muscles and shed the woes

No more acting no more happy face

You can be yourself and slow the pace

No more pretending that you are okay

No more smiling and no more play

Time to rest, time to sigh

Time to lie down and time to cry

If only people knew

What it is like to be you

To be so tired to be in so much pain

To have no life it's such a shame

But tomorrow the smile will be back

And the game will go on till your head hits the sack

No-one can know, you can't let anyone in.

As that would show weakness and that is a sin.
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Re: How I feel.

Postby crazycat36 » Thu Mar 27, 2014 12:23 pm

One word.....BRILLIANT xxx
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Re: How I feel.

Postby catscout » Thu Mar 27, 2014 1:32 pm

Aww thank you, wasn't sure but I know a lot of us do this even without meaning too. I do.

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Re: How I feel.

Postby trigger » Thu Mar 27, 2014 1:49 pm

that's just how i feel wish i could put it into words the same as you :-)
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Re: How I feel.

Postby catscout » Thu Mar 27, 2014 2:04 pm

Cheers, it just flowed out last night when I was feeling low. It's easy to write it when you're feeling it and just have to put it into words.

Just wasn't sure if I was the only one who kept it in, except to close friends and family of course, but living on my own this is what it feels like at the end of a long day. Of course it's not really a sin but you know what I mean. :-)

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Re: How I feel.

Postby Tabasco » Thu Mar 27, 2014 7:07 pm

I had lump in my throat reading this. So. So true
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Re: How I feel.

Postby catscout » Thu Mar 27, 2014 7:11 pm

Aww thank you. Just hoped it got the message across, now I just need to figure out where else to put it so it can help let people know how we feel!


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Re: How I feel.

Postby Tabasco » Fri Mar 28, 2014 1:34 am

You could make it into a nice poster and have it set round hospitals, doctors as a fibro message x
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Re: How I feel.

Postby catscout » Fri Mar 28, 2014 1:53 am

Yeah I could try something like that, it's quite long but I might try to make into a poster or something.

Thanks T. :)
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Re: How I feel.

Postby johnashu » Sat May 03, 2014 12:56 am

beautiful
I am a Bi-polatic-Fibromyalgic.. I am Obsessive and Sceptical. I am a right Polymath..

"The only way to be always right, is to change your mind when you are proved wrong. Celebrate your mistakes as knowledge gained"
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Re: How I feel.

Postby catscout » Sat May 03, 2014 1:07 am

Thanks johnashu.


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